TwirlGrrl
Posts : 2
Join date : 2009-12-01
 |  Subject: Proxy  Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:47 pm | |
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Genre(s): Romance/Hurt/Comfort
Rating: Rated: M
Summary: Edward has transferred his residency to Seattle, and Bella isn't
happy about it. Or is she? Two lifelong friends and adversaries examine the
"path not taken", while facing an uncertain future. Adult AH Characters. A
collaboration by Slutch 32 & TwirlGrrl | |
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*kawaii**fairy*
Volturi
Posts : 5535
Join date : 2009-10-17
Age : 38
Location : Cheltenham, UK
| | Subject: Re: Proxy Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:59 am | |
| Just read Chapter One.. Love it! Personal Shopper is THE perfect job for Alice  Haha love the Tree House line, lovely Esme  I love the opening, really good first chapter, and I wanna know if she is pregnant!!! And what happens when Edward comes to stay. It's awesome, Will continue reading asap  x | |
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kawaii-star
Volturi
Posts : 2540
Join date : 2009-10-17
Age : 37
Location : London, UK
| | Subject: Re: Proxy Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:48 pm | |
| Wow! Pretty good!  xxx | |
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TwirlGrrl
Posts : 2
Join date : 2009-12-01
| | Subject: Re: Proxy Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:50 pm | |
| Thanks y'all. We're pretty proud of it- we put so much work into outlining and character dev. Literally, for months before we finally posted the first chapter. | |
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*kawaii**fairy*
Volturi
Posts : 5535
Join date : 2009-10-17
Age : 38
Location : Cheltenham, UK
| | Subject: Re: Proxy Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:55 pm | |
| You can tell, it kinda summarises all the characters involved in tha very first chapter and what everyone is doing, how they know each other etc, but without being boring, I bet it was hell to write, but definately worth it! | |
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