Sacrificial Lamb

Hi there, I'm new to your site but I've been following you on twitter and finally joined. I'm writing my first multi-chapter fic now and have a couple one-shots done. Thought I'd like to the multi-chapter if that's okay?

Sacrificial Lamb is a canon fic that takes place from the moment of Bella's kiss with Jacob in Eclipse. In my version, she doesn't find some hidden love for Jacob at all, she still only loves him as a friend and is forced to let him go in order to have her life with Edward. My big problem with BD was that Bella didn't have to make any sacrifices in order for her choice to have eternity with the Cullens but in my fic she has to.

Here's a link if anybody is interested in reading!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5390243/1/Sacrificial_Lamb
https://i.servimg.com/u/f11/14/61/70/57/sacrif11.jpg

Just read Chapter One, I think I will def like this FF, I found BD too easy as well for Bella, and I am not a Jacob fan, so combine the two, and I def think I will like your version!!

Awww thank you! I hope you continue to like it! It's angsty in the first few chapters but soon gives over to romance and humor with a mix of angst (cause you know Edward is a worrier!) I'm so glad you're checking it out!

Haha oh yes, he is such a worrier!

Angst is always good Always love abit of tension to mix in, I will def continue to read it, at work atm, but will hopefully read at least Chapter Two today as well

Great, can't wait to hear what you think

Chapter Two time...

You've portrayed Edward perfectly, he is to gentlemanly to hate Jacob, and that has always angered me, Jacob took advantage of Bella, he may have taken care of her but not without reason. Edward is such a nice guy! You describe his thoughts so realisticly!

And having to hear all of Jacobs faults, you descrive that so much better than Meyer Poor Edward!!

I liked hearing what all the pack thought as well, good idea!! Ooh last line is a killer, love it's from both POV, always nice to see how the other is feeling

Love it. I rambled on abit there, sorry

Wow, thanks, I'm blown away by that! How far did you get?

Haha I thought I was rambling sorry!

Chapter Three time [sorry for the delay, can only come online at work] x

Awww great, hope you like it. The first 4 alternate views of the same thing, though chapter 4 goes beyond where chapter 3 does, then each chapter becomes it's own after that, use the viewpoint that makes the most sense in the moment.

aw im kinda glad edward gave her a hard time, she made me angry too, lol.

nooo how can she still stick up for jacob? silly bella, just be with edward and ignore jacob always

poor edward

awww he put the ring back on at the end yay!! and jacob heard her say she didn't love him, hehe

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Awww great, hope you like it. The first 4 alternate views of the same thing, though chapter 4 goes beyond where chapter 3 does, then each chapter becomes it's own after that, use the viewpoint that makes the most sense in the moment.

ooh sounds awesome, how clever!

Fear not, Jake is not around for too long. I had to respect their friendship but I have no respect for their "romance". None of that. He's gone by chapter 7 or 8.

Yessss!!! This I like to hear And I TOTALLY agree with you, repect with friendship, hell no to romance

Hehe I figured that would make you happy. I know it does me.

reading time!!

love how chapter 4 ended

Like I could forget that. Like the idea of pushing her against a tree and taking her wasn’t in the back of my mind right now. I wasn’t ready to think about that though so I put my lips to hers, the best way to keep her silent. “Come on, let’s go find the family.” I put her down and hand in hand we stepped into the woods.

haha best line to finish the chapter ever!!

chapter 5...

argh Victoria, she is such a good villian, so irrational and all she wants is to avenge James, understandable i guess though, haha

“We’ve always considered you to be a part of the family, Bella, but I want you to know how proud we’ll be to have you be a Cullen.”

yay! i hope so as always, a great read and soooo well written, sorry i didn't read more today xx

Awww I'm glad you're still reading! I'm motoring along and eying the finish line now, I probably have about 7 more chapters to write. I"m amazed and humbled that people are enjoying it so much! Thank you for your kind words!

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